Jet - a preview by StingDaFling

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=feUrJ27ON9M&feature=player_embedded




screw the rules i have cinnamon buns

So you redid the groll?

I hope it's alot stronger. Also, track looks really good so far. hopefully you'll get lcc soon.

no i did not redo it, i took out half and replaced with a hand fling.
then it grolls BACK into a tail fling, and then shoulder, then some lulzy thing that speeds him up, groll yadayadayada, then the foot thing were talking about on msn. :3

/spoil

cools i like the track so far hurry and finish it

dont rush me :I.

everyone likes the track so far...
can i have some constructive criticism.. please?

(magix's point)

ok i'll try huhmmmm (raises fist) make the trak go completely fast no slow points 0.o (as if there is any )

yeah i already knew that

puls to tell whats wrong with the track and how to improve it, that helps state ones skill in linerider and it helps the maker of the track to improve.

i dont really think theres much improvement to say about this track so.. nevermind

yea got som strong fling thar looks cool

i thought i said to give criticism :I

"omg lol thats awesome "
"oh man thats cool "
"cool "

no stuff like that :I

how about u show a bigger preview so we can get a better idea for criticism